i can see what u were trying to pull off here and the intial idea is actually nice. to improve the wnd result maybe just use the pants as the main piece, with a loose black shirt and a black bomber jacket and white or black sneakers. the cap is ok, but tbh the gucci velvet backpack is feom a whole other movie, so maybe just add a brightly coloured shopper or backpack if u rly want to, to just break that whole neutral colour vibe with some colour :))))