@swiftie.13 lol sure! In my new edit, Victoria goes into better detail about her past. And I’m working on a scene where it talks about the aftermath of Jonathan’s death and her father leaving the family. I’m gonna post the new revised chapters (1 & 2) soon so stay tuned!
@heymfsitzem_143 yes I'm am 😂😂 all I want in the book for Jordan not to die he's so cute and maybe you could get more flashbacks for Victoria's childhood that made her who she is in present but keep going with your book it's amazing
@swiftie.13 I think it’s safe to assume that your my biggest fan lol. I hope you’ll like the changes I’m making to the book. If there’s a part you really liked and want me to include im my revision, let me know asap so I can add it
@heymfsitzem_143 ofc I am!!! I've read all of ur book chapters and desktop disorder I haven't read it yet but I'll make sure to read it rn, tbh I have exams coming on the way that's why I don't read quite a lot these days but I absolutely love your books and poetry ❤️❤️